First, how not to write real estate ads.
Take a moment to think about this real estate ad that appeared in a suburban newspaper recently:
A babbling brook runs through the back yard of this spotless cape with new furnace and cabinets. Asking $350,000. Sellers anxious. Call 888-8888 today.
I don’t know how that ad strikes you - it describes a brook, a furnace and the agitated psychological state of the current owners. But I think that you will agree that it does very little to get the house sold, for one very simple reason: It fails to address the desires and needs of the people who are the target buyers for $350,000 homes in the area, who are young couples with children who are relocating from the city nearby - and buying their first houses. It also fails to mention the number of bedrooms or baths - critical information that people need.
Now that you know what not to do, let's discuss how to write real estate ads that do sell.
With young first-time younger buyers in mind, that ad would have stood a better chance of selling the house if it highlighted this information:
How to Write Real Estate Ads that Get Buyers to Call
Dr. Gary Eldred of our real estate faculty says that successful real estate ads need to incorporate four critical factors that he calls AIDA:
If we apply the AIDA yardstick to the property ad that started this blog post, we end up with this:
Walk to Connors Elementary School from this spotless charming cape with deck, fenced backyard play area and bright family room. Family-friendly, low-traffic street. Eco-friendly heat/central air system with 10-year warranty. 3 bed, 2.5 bath. Offered at $350,000, owner financing possible. Open Sunday 1-4! Call owner’s cell at 888-888-8888.
But remember . . .
A successful real estate ad needs to address the specific needs and desires of your target buyers. They could be young families, retirees who like to play golf, or aging seniors who want to live on one level. So before you start crafting your ad, take a moment to understand who your target buyers are and how to write a real estate ad that sells - then write an ad that speaks directly to them.
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3 Comments
I enjoyed the article, we have to be so very careful these days. You did a great job of implying security while not stating that it was secure; placing the job of security on the homeowner by suggesting that they could watch the children out the kitchen window.
So many times I see words like, safe, secure or quiet that imply a guarantee of security. Perhaps I have been through too many fair housing and liability classes, but you did a great job of setting the scene without taking any of the liability.
D. Ben Edsall
Broker – ARM, AEREP
Turn-Key Properties LLC
7312 E 67th St.
Kansas City, MO 64133
816-313-8876
http://www.turnkeyproperties.org
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