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This is a copy of an email I just received for a donation I made to a non profit (since I do like this organization I am protecting their identity): Dear Josef Katz, This is a confirmation of an online transaction placed with XXXX Needs Inc.    The transaction totaled $XXX.XX and will be processed to your account. Order Number  : 1354-9 Approval Code : 266879 How many problems do you see with this note? Why so formal? No feeling or personality (aren't not for profits known for making you feel for their cause?) What should I do with those numbers?  Not sure what they are for. No Thank more...